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Editorial notes
"Varför valde du den aktuella riktlinjen?" / "Varför valde du den aktuella filmen?"
Keep the instructional tone, but vary sentence openings or group related prompts to reduce repetition.
"den aktuella riktlinjen" / "den aktuella filmen"
If this page can stand alone, briefly restate or label the chosen guideline and film; otherwise, ensure the preceding section makes the referents explicit.
The chapter begins immediately with "Varför valde du den aktuella riktlinjen?"
Add one concise introductory line that explains why the reader is answering these questions.
The text is a list of four questions with no subheadings or transitions.
Organize the prompts into a clearer sequence or categories to improve usability.
Phrases like "Vilka diskussioner tror du kommer uppstå i gruppen?" and "Identifiera och skriv ner en utmaning" are functional but unspecific.
Add slight specificity about the expected depth or format of the response.
Four consecutive question lines with no transition or example
If this is meant to open a section, consider adding a brief framing sentence that explains why these questions matter.
The chunk summary describes it as an assignment instruction set that frames the work to follow.
Add a transition sentence that links this reflection task to the next step.
Revision guidance
- Rewrite the section as a clearly framed reflection prompt with one short introductory line and organized questions.
- Keep the instructional tone, but make the purpose of each question explicit.
- Ensure the prompts move from explanation of choice to anticipated dialogue to identification of a concrete challenge.
- Use formatting that makes each question easy to answer separately.
- If appropriate, add one sentence that tells the reader how the reflections will be used in the assignment.